1. Posted: July 31, 2016In:

    When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)

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    Thanks for the suggestion dpg, She is a Youtuber love expert and the Youtube device is critical for the plot of the movie. S

    Thanks for the suggestion dpg,

    She is a Youtuber love expert and the Youtube device is critical for the plot of the movie.

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  2. Posted: July 17, 2016In:

    REVISED: A casino waitress is in love with the scientist who accidentally made her three times bigger, but while her size leads to Vegas stardom, she must also face a blackmailing mobster and rescue the kidnapped scientist.

    Vincent Logliner

    Here's a one-page synopsis for STAND TALL! that might better provide logline suggestions: file:///home/chronos/u-9600f2f96a654d29e2087168927467c74d89db09/Downloads/071716%20stand%20tall%20logline%252Fsynopsis.pdf

    Here’s a one-page synopsis for STAND TALL! that might better provide logline suggestions:

    file:///home/chronos/u-9600f2f96a654d29e2087168927467c74d89db09/Downloads/071716%20stand%20tall%20logline%252Fsynopsis.pdf

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  3. Posted: July 12, 2016In:

    (REVISED) When an antisocial apocalypse ?prepper? is the only person in her small town uninfected by a virus transmitted through the trial of a ?telepathic phone?, she must stop preparing for the world?s end and start saving it.

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    Dkpough1 Uberwriter

    "When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town." Better. But cut some words out. Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find aRead more

    “When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town.”

    Better. But cut some words out.
    Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find a way to cure it and stop it from spreading.?(~23 words)

    But what specifically does she do? In my earlier example, I said use the supplies she’s hoarded. Is it something similar? Must she find an uninfected doctor? What is it?

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