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Revised Logline……When an introverted player from a footy obsessed family, is cut from the team, he joins the cheerleading squad, despite being bullied, he competes at the National Championships, losing his chance of a scholarship but gaining the love of his life.
The revised logline presents little action and little conflict - he joins a cheerleading squad, after a bit of bullying he competes at the nationals and then he falls in love. What's stopping him? What obstacles MUST he over come? In addition the stakes are low (maybe I'm missing something) what's tRead more
The revised logline presents little action and little conflict – he joins a cheerleading squad, after a bit of bullying he competes at the nationals and then he falls in love. What’s stopping him? What obstacles MUST he over come?
In addition the stakes are low (maybe I’m missing something) what’s the worst that would happen should he fail as a cheerleader?
Biggest problem with this concept is it lacks a clear unifying goal, what is it the MC wants? Is it to win the cheerleading championships? Is it to find love? Is it the scholarship?
See lessDavid, a young aspiring drummer growing up in the 1980s struggles through the challenges of adolescence and finds that friendship, music, and the human spirit are the mightiest weapons of all.
The mightiest weapons of all... to combat what exactly? What are the "struggles of adolescence"? As the comments above have stated try to be more specific with your loglines because this is an interesting setting. Whiplash meets Sing Street maybe?
The mightiest weapons of all… to combat what exactly? What are the “struggles of adolescence”? As the comments above have stated try to be more specific with your loglines because this is an interesting setting.
Whiplash meets Sing Street maybe?
See lessI did jot know where to post this question so I wrote it here. My question was: Is writing a logline same for a short film, feature film and Documentary. Very rudimentary question but I was curious.
Perhaps, but I don't think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons -- and that's another valuabRead more
Perhaps, but I don’t think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.
The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons — and that’s another valuable opportunity the site provides. (A shout out to Karel!) ?But it was originally designed as a promotional tool, to entice producers and directors to read a finished script.
Now, I realize ?that for historical documentaries, ?a script may be written before any video is shot. ?I’ve amassed a pile of documentation for an historical drama set between 1908 and 1920. ? Enough enough to do a documentary. ?And in both cases, I would use the same logline. Because the story is done and finished — I know how it ends. ?It’s ?essentially the same “plot”.?
But in documentaries for a current ongoing events, you don’t know how it’s going to end. ?You may not even have identified a protagonist, a ?person around whom you will frame a narrative.
A logline is a concise description of a plot. ? And the formal definition of a plot, per Aristotle in the “Poetics”, is an imitation of action, ?a mimicry of real life. ? Which he differentiated from ?histories — the “written documentaries” of his day. ? ?Aristotle said dramatic stories need a plot to succeed whereas histories don’t.?
?Although documentaries must, of necessity, edit reality, they are supposed ?to make a good faith effort to ?conform to known?facts. ?Plot is under no such obligation; it’s has the freedom to bend, wantonly ignore the facts, or make up fictions to fit it’s dramatic purpose.?
Shakespeare’s “Richard III” is a fabulous — and fabulist –historical drama. ?It distorts events and warps characters for the purpose of its plot. ?A documentary of Richard III, faithful to the known historical facts, ?would present a different story, a different portrait.
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