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An adventure-seeking elderly wife convinces her risk-averse husband to go on a European road trip to honour their friends’ will by scattering their ashes following their unexpected death.
Thank you Nir Shelter for your input.?Gives me plenty of food for thought!
Thank you Nir Shelter for your input.?Gives me plenty of food for thought!
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When you say, there isn't any conflict... I have to be a little worried. Rules are made to be broken, That is true but the one rule that would be hard to break is the rule "Story is Conflict" Not only should your overall story have conflict, every episode should have conflict and every scene shouldRead more
When you say, there isn’t any conflict… I have to be a little worried.
Rules are made to be broken, That is true but the one rule that would be hard to break is the rule “Story is Conflict”
Not only should your overall story have conflict, every episode should have conflict and every scene should have conflict. I am not sure how you can get around that rule.
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The last revision of the logline is very?wordy,?and?describes too few plot points.I direct?you?to my original comments, describe a single main character with a single goal. ?Also, no names should be mentioned in the logline, unless it's a biopic or based on widely known historical events.Here is a fRead more
The last revision of the logline is very?wordy,?and?describes too few plot points.
I direct?you?to my original comments, describe a single main character with a single goal. ?Also, no names should be mentioned in the logline, unless it’s a biopic or based on widely known historical events.
Here is a formula for you to use, stick to this structure when constructing your next draft:
After an out of the ordinary and significant event happens to a flawed main character, he or she are motivated to take a specific action in order to accomplish a compelling goal.
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