1. Posted: October 31, 2016In:

    A college dropout turn travel agent living in Manhattan is faking his way through life. He receives news that his family’s dilapidated farm in Outback Australia, is facing foreclosure. Desperate to save the farm and fulfill his dream, he books an ageing reality TV star a vacation there, passing it off as a five-star resort. He and his family scramble to hide the truth, as they try to snag an investment from the celebrity.

    Richiev Singularity

    Unless this has already been written I would make a suggestion.I don't believe the lead should to try to make the celebrity believe the farm is a five star resort, I don't think that is plausible. Instead I would have the lead try to convince the celebrity his farm is the new 'in' thing. CelebritiesRead more

    Unless this has already been written I would make a suggestion.

    I don’t believe the lead should to try to make the celebrity believe the farm is a five star resort, I don’t think that is plausible. Instead I would have the lead try to convince the celebrity his farm is the new ‘in’ thing. Celebrities are always doing dumb stuff because it’s ‘in’.

    So he would convince the celebrity it is like a ‘dude’ ranch only with farming. (Or a real life farmville) And he would have the celebrity hoeing the garden, feeding the pigs and bailing ?hay.

    “All the celebrities are doing it, We just had Madonna last week”

    A bond would form between the celebrity (I would make one male and one female) maybe even a little romance, then just when you think maybe something will happen, the the celebrity will find out she was tricked! This of course would lead to the ‘all is lost moment’

    However if this is already written this was just a suggestion.

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  2. Posted: October 29, 2016In:

    A vengeful lonely guy consults to his multiple psychopathic personalities, who all either support him, frustrate him or simply do random stuff, while he is deciding whether he should kill his cheating girlfriend or forgive her.

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    "When he catches the love of his life cheating on him, a recovering psychotic stops taking his meds which triggers an internal war with his multiple personalities, between those who wish to kill her and those who wish to forgive."

    “When he catches the love of his life cheating on him, a recovering psychotic stops taking his meds which triggers an internal war with his multiple personalities, between those who wish to kill her and those who wish to forgive.”

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  3. Posted: October 30, 2016In:

    A rag-tag group of technologically challenged small towners try to thwart a one ship alien invasion.

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    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    As I see it, it's more than just a situation; it could easily be the entire second act. I'm not entirely sure exactly what technologically challenged means. Are they a bunch of people who don't know how to program their VCRs, or whatever the contemporary equivalent of that is? Senior citizens? NothiRead more

    As I see it, it’s more than just a situation; it could easily be the entire second act.

    I’m not entirely sure exactly what technologically challenged means. Are they a bunch of people who don’t know how to program their VCRs, or whatever the contemporary equivalent of that is? Senior citizens? Nothing wrong with that, since I get the feeling, this is a comedy, or at least have comedic elements.
    I agree that even when there’s a group of leading characters, there needs to be a clear protagonist, a leader. One character to focus on, even if he has a group of friends to help him.
    This protagonist needs a goal, but I suppose that is to stop the alien invasion. It’s always good to have a ticking clock, and also what’s at stake? What happens if he fails?
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