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  1. Posted: February 12, 2017In: Comedy

    A father and the estranged daughter he seeks to reconnect with accompany an affluent friend to a secret restaurant. The father is horrified to learn the restaurant serves nothing but human meat, and must find a way to cope while protecting his daughter’s innocence.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 15, 2017 at 7:19 am

    Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it's tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels likRead more

    Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it’s tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels like an external add on for ‘crazy’ effect.

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  2. Posted: February 12, 2017In: Comedy

    A jock and a cheerleader break up and start competing with each other in a student body presidential election at their high school.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2017 at 6:57 pm

    Agreed with DPG, keep them together for more conflict and subsequently more humour.

    Agreed with DPG, keep them together for more conflict and subsequently more humour.

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2016In: Comedy

    When a woman with incorruptible morals is targeted as an employee by gangsters her honesty and integrity are challenged when her beloved employees pull off the crime of the century.

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    Added an answer on February 5, 2017 at 2:25 pm

    You give us two inciting incidents. I would start with the heist and then tell about the moral dilemma

    You give us two inciting incidents. I would start with the heist and then tell about the moral dilemma

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