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When a pregnant schoolteacher learns that her father is the half-man/half-bear who slaughtered her family, she teams up with a transexual scientist to convince the monster in becoming the high school mascot.
WEREBEAR When a Transphobic Baptist schoolteacher learns her father is?the half man/ half bear that accidentally?slaughtered?their family, she must team up with a flamboyant transsexual scientist to convince the shy ?monster?to become the high school's mascot in a last minute effort to trap?the WereRead more
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When a Transphobic Baptist schoolteacher learns her father is?the half man/ half bear that accidentally?slaughtered?their family, she must team up with a flamboyant transsexual scientist to convince the shy ?monster?to become the high school’s mascot in a last minute effort to trap?the Werebear?before?it kills the entire town
See lessA whiny arrogant owner of a store is being visited by three different spirits in order for him to preserve and save his relations with his closed ones.
Agreed with the above. Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson - in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for beRead more
Agreed with the above.
Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson – in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for being a douche.
On? a side note, like Richiev I think this needs a distinctive element to help it stand out from the many other stories of a similar premise.
See lessWhen he starts visualizing the sexual fantasies of anyone he touches, a love-struck freshman has one week to find true love or be doomed to rule hell. Title: SixSixSix
I'm always for simplification, however, in this instance, I still fail to see the cause and effect connecting the inciting incident and goal. Him getting these powers out of the blue doesn't logically connect with him needing to find true love. What does true love mean? Must he be married? Engaged?Read more
I’m always for simplification, however, in this instance, I still fail to see the cause and effect connecting the inciting incident and goal. Him getting these powers out of the blue doesn’t logically connect with him needing to find true love. What does true love mean? Must he be married? Engaged? Committed? Love is subjective and even in the fairy tails requires a symbolic act of some sort, what’s his?
Lastly, what’s at stake? So what if he visualizes other people’s desires, is that a bad thing? What does he have to lose that forces him to make a deal with the devil?
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