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PERTH GIRLS ARE EASY – When a space alien is chosen by his people to go to where the beautiful humans are (LA) and mate with one, he miscalculates and lands in remote Perth, Australia. Now armed only with pop culture references and bourgie lines like “I’m a producer”, he must find and convince a down to earth Aussie girl to have a baby with him or he’ll return home alone and be executed.
Unfortunately, at 68 words in length this is more akin to an elevator pitch than a logline.
Unfortunately, at 68 words in length this is more akin to an elevator pitch than a logline.
See less“Hollywood meets Bollywood when a manic-depressive woman on the brink of a psychosis checks herself into the open section of an Indian lunatic asylum to find inspiration to make – with the help of her international therapy group – a Bollywood musical. But her frustrated shrink – ones a Bollywood star – is on to her.” TV series.
Grammar aside. Best to shorten the logline and describe the core plot in the story: After she is committed to an asylum in India, a Hollywood actress must..., In the logline, as it is now, there is no clear motivation pushing her to act. What must she do or else? What is at stake?
Grammar aside.
Best to shorten the logline and describe the core plot in the story:
After she is committed to an asylum in India, a Hollywood actress must…,
In the logline, as it is now, there is no clear motivation pushing her to act. What must she do or else? What is at stake?
See lessFAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.
PISTOLS & CARNATIONS When a passionate but shitty junior high rock band concocts a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy at their school's highly coveted variety show, its not only a success it goes viral and catches the attention of Super-Producer David Geffen. Now they have one Saturday nighRead more
PISTOLS & CARNATIONS
See lessWhen a passionate but shitty junior high rock band concocts a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy at their school’s highly coveted variety show, its not only a success it goes viral and catches the attention of Super-Producer David Geffen. Now they have one Saturday night at the famed Whiskey a Go Go on the Sunset Strip in Hollywood to prove they’re the real thing.