1. Posted: May 20, 2017In:

    When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    But why Goth? Wouldn't it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy? Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.

    But why Goth? Wouldn’t it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy?

    Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.

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  2. Posted: May 17, 2017In:

    When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

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    hihello8484 Logliner

    Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.

    Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2017In:

    Cutting ties with society, a overconfident young man embarks on a soul-searching solo hike into the canadian wilderness. He comes to the humble realization of his own inexperience as hostile weather sets in. To make matters worse, he runs into a girl stuck in a similar situation camped only a few yards away. As they reluctantly join forces to survive the storm, they swallow their pride and come to the humbling conclusion that perhaps they aren’t as mature, independent or unique as they thought, and that maybe soul searching ventures aren’t as grandiose or successful as books led them to believe. (Short Film)

    CaptainMayI19pp Logliner

    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above 'Formula' direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above ‘Formula’ direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

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