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Logline: Spike an affable, autistic football genius helps a team win its first super Bowl. Concept: Spike and his older brother Bradley traverse through the city causing an uproar all while Spike is preparing the head coach to win the Super Bowl.
There is a story in there somewhere. Look at the want and needs of the people involved. How does he get to the coach? Why and how are they causing havoc? Why are these related?
There is a story in there somewhere. Look at the want and needs of the people involved.
How does he get to the coach?
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Why are these related?
After a fluke undercover drug bust saves their jobs, repairs the department?s damaged reputation and turns them into unlikely heroes, two sleazy and morally bankrupt city cops are targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.
>>>targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.The logline unintentionally but? nonetheless essentially frames the (head of) the drug syndicate as the protagonist because it gives him an overarching objective goal in response to the inciting incident of the cop caperRead more
>>>targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.
The logline unintentionally but? nonetheless essentially frames the (head of) the drug syndicate as the protagonist because it gives him an overarching objective goal in response to the inciting incident of the cop caper while giving no overarching objective goal to the cops.
If the cops are the protagonists, then the logline needs to frame a plot? in terms of their objective goal? — not that of the syndicate.
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Agreed with Richiev and DPG. The plot isn't clear, what specific event motivates him and what exactly is he motivated to do?
Agreed with Richiev and DPG.
The plot isn’t clear, what specific event motivates him and what exactly is he motivated to do?
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