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An alien living as their friendly neighbourhood mechanic, must prevent his beloved street from getting sold block-by-block before the greedy billionaire visits his garage
egghead is a nice title. Would indicate a comedy a bit more to me. ?"their" friendly throws me -- who is "their" referring to? ? I'd stick to "the friendly." Block-by-block is also overkill for me. ?Can you come up with a better more nefarious description than billionaire? ?Greedy developer? ?friendRead more
egghead is a nice title. Would indicate a comedy a bit more to me. ?”their” friendly throws me — who is “their” referring to? ? I’d stick to “the friendly.”
Block-by-block is also overkill for me. ?Can you come up with a better more nefarious description than billionaire? ?Greedy developer? ?friendly and beloved ?serve the same purpose for me in regards to his affection for his neighbors.
Idea:
A shapeshifting alien, living as the friendly neighborhood mechanic, must prevent his block from getting sold before the greedy developer discovers eggs hibernating in his garage. ?
See lessA loyal husband and his wife have a double date with their two best friends. All goes well until the husband’s strong romantic feelings for his best friends’ girlfriend, who happens to be his ex, show up in the middle of the date. TITLE: Double Trouble
"When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date..." Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing? "After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear..." But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, sRead more
“When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date…”
Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing?
“After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear…”
But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, since he is dragged in Act II by his wife
I get a feeling that you kinda get the logline formula..
I’d suggest you post more loglines to see how it goes
Don’t go missing mrmmr
If you don’t believe me, read the crappy loglines most logliners posted in the beginning of their journey here
See lessWhile yours was a decent enough try..
When an obsessive archaeologist accidentally releases a near-omnipotent demon, he must impersonate its boisterous, evil overlord to con it back into captivity.
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is: Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuousRead more
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is:
Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuous actions, that include delays, thereby buying your buddies the time to defuse it.
Very basic. There?s more to it, but yeah.
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