1. Posted: April 7, 2018In:

    A Vegas waitress tripled in size falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her, sacrificing newfound showroom stardom to save him when he’s kidnapped by her abusive ex, a blackmailing mobster and a wealthy, widowed former showgirl.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    "Tripled in size" ... so, she's like, a giant? 5 meters tall? How would doing ANYTHING jeopardise stardom for a person 5 meters tall? That's like, twice as tall as the biggest person ever. She can save the man she loves and then just step back into the limelight? We need some clarity. "When her abusRead more

    “Tripled in size” … so, she’s like, a giant? 5 meters tall?

    How would doing ANYTHING jeopardise stardom for a person 5 meters tall? That’s like, twice as tall as the biggest person ever. She can save the man she loves and then just step back into the limelight? We need some clarity.

    “When her abusive ex kidnaps her new beau, a waitress recently turned into a giant must get him back.”

    This logline also feels like it needs a deadline – like, they’re doing something to the scientist, which provides the urgency for the character to take action. Otherwise … I don’t really know what would make this story engaging, other than that the protagonist is 3 times the size of a normal human.

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2018In:

    Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.

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    dpg Singularity

    Well said Valentin.? I agree with you on ever point.? Especially on the point about the temper of the times in the movie industry, the #MeToo and #TimesUp movements.? It's time to flip the trope, the Pygmalion? plot, so that it's a woman who gives a man a make over, transforms him into a player.

    Well said Valentin.? I agree with you on ever point.? Especially on the point about the temper of the times in the movie industry, the #MeToo and #TimesUp movements.?

    It’s time to flip the trope, the Pygmalion? plot, so that it’s a woman who gives a man a make over, transforms him into a player.

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2018In:

    When a teenager shows up engaged, his possessive single mother fakes her love for his fianc?’s single dad, to foil their premature marriage

    dpg Singularity

    >>>It?s her objective goal to fake it so he cannot marry her step sister (legally speaking)I think it would make for an interesting story if the teenage kids fall in love after their parents do.? Talk about complications.fwiw

    >>>It?s her objective goal to fake it so he cannot marry her step sister (legally speaking)

    I think it would make for an interesting story if the teenage kids fall in love after their parents do.? Talk about complications.

    fwiw

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