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• on After her father’s bankruptcy, a high school student determined to attend Harvard must outwit two high school teachers who involve her in a cruel wager to determine whether two students can be made to fall in love.

  Writing a logline is some seriously hard work. This logline has a familiar ring to it. I am reminded of a movie named Dogfight. The film is about a dirty game played on innocents. Everyone gets their just desserts. Check…

• on When a young climber becomes paraplegic after an accident. In the rehabilitation center, she must accept her reality and find a new motivation for her life before choosing suicide.

  Good and compelling summary of what the story is about. I want to read the story or see the movie.

• on A happily wed couple have their lives upended by revelations of scandalous family secrets thanks to their spiteful relative.

  This is the logline for a novella about using a family tree search service where a person spits in a tube and mails the sample in. Then in days, the results come in and the person finds out something they…

• on An uxorious husband stops at nothing to get his forlorn wife pregnant while he struggles with his resentful adult step-children over their mother’s estate.

  The logline is to help me finish a university class about writing webisodes. Thanks for your longliners.