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Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

October 10, 2013
When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.

May 20, 2013
A travelling taco truck smuggling psilocybin mushrooms encounters an interstellar hitchhiker on an interstate highway. Is this interplanetary visitor legit, and are his warnings of an impending alien apocalypse worth heeding?

January 11, 2013
An underpaid banker gets a venomous dose of indigenous sorcery when he abuses a loophole to syphon money from a deceased account intended for a community group.

January 11, 2013
An unassuming immigrant unleashes his secret oriental power on the criminal cartel intent on corrupting his family.

January 11, 2013

on Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

A cowardly pastor must protect his flock of bible-students when their remote camping ground is infiltrated by devil-worshipers hunting human sacrifices.
on Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

When bible-students discover their school-camp leaders are devil-worshipers in disguise, a nerdy-student must shepherd his younger colleagues to safety before becoming human sacrifices.
on Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

I guess I'm trying to say they'll become human sacrifices...i.e. dead. I'll rework it. Thanks for the input.
on Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

When school-campers discover they're being groomed for a black-mass to raise the devil, a nerdy altar-boy must lead his fellows to overcome their devil-worshipping teachers.
on Expelled bad-boy student James is accepted at a prestigious high-school, only to learn his teachers are blood-sacrificing devil-worshippers with an eye for troubled pupils.

Thanks Andrew. The story is his teachers are devil worshipers masquerading as trusted educators, and the stakes are that they intend to sacrifice their newest student to the devil. Do you think that's unclear in the logline, or that that's…
on After accidentally discovering a superhero?s secret identity, a young psychiatrist is coerced into treating the various mental disorders of a group of eccentric crime-fighters.

What nicholasandrewhalls said. But apart from that, this idea sounds like a lot of fun. Does the psychiatrist become a stand-in superhero when the heroes in treatment are too down to fight crime?
on When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.

That's great food for thought. I pictured the reptilian leader as a huge, mythical snake that's embedded in the deepest chamber of the sewer system - one that's so grotesque and nasty it strikes at its human sacrificial offerings and…
on In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

Adopted Axiom, this is getting closer to distilling your idea, but at the moment it still concentrates on explaining this fantasy world and its inhabitants. Maybe try looking at it from your protagonist's POV- what exactly is his goal, and…
on When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.

Thanks for the suggestions y'all. In my outline, the street-urchin was a victim of child-abuse, so his fixation for protecting an unknown innocent is his path toward absolution. However, it's hard to tie him and the child together, as no…
on When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.

That's true Jean-Marie. 'Enslave humanity' has global concern, which I think is too big for this story. I'm going to localise it down to a smaller environment, which means only some kids get hypnotised, not all of them ;)