Wisdom Orez

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• on When sharman’s parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her, in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman must destroy earth in absorbing more sound energy in defeating an alien invader who wants her powers.

  Please Is it to work on the Logline or to make the screenplay match to what it the Logline says?

• on When sharman’s parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her, in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman must destroy earth in absorbing more sound energy in defeating an alien invader who wants her powers.

  Yes. She have it in mind to know how to get back later with traveling in time. IS this Logline cool?

• on Living her youthful age seems that everyone is trying to kill her for taking her price paid gifted God’s eye power. A mirrow-like earth planet alien invades ready to do whatever it takes to have the one alike power of the universe which we leave her no choice but to destroy earth in order to convert alot energy in defeating the invader. 

  It's same, I am just beign more specific, I used the Logline Generator. Please let me know where I am at wrong.

• on Living her youthful age seems that everyone is trying to kill her for taking her price paid gifted God’s eye power. A mirrow-like earth planet alien invades ready to do whatever it takes to have the one alike power of the universe which we leave her no choice but to destroy earth in order to convert alot energy in defeating the invader. 

  POSTED IT ALREADY. IS THIS BETTER? When sharman's parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her , in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman…