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An old-school private investigator, assisted by his tech-savvy daughter, investigates the alleged death of the son of a presidential candidate only to uncover a deep conspiracy that puts them in the crosshairs.

August 15, 2015

on A loner ice road trucker finds herself the unlikely protector of a young gangland execution witness, and must race them across the wild Alaskan ice roads to the border while being hunted by the merciless criminals.

I'm not sure if my issue with the longline is the wording, or just the storyline. Not sure why the trucker would be the protector of a witness, and why they need to race to the border.
on Hunting a dangerous fugitive in 13th century England, a group of mercenaries led by a disgraced knight must brave a surreal frozen hellscape in order to bring their prey to justice.

I think this is pretty solid. It's pretty clear what the key pieces are, and what is likely to happen.