WillieBarnesjr

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With Phillip feeling like Barbra has let herself go, he gets another heavy load on his back, literally, when he finds out that she has entered them into the Wife Carrying Contest in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.

November 20, 2012
Revision: An unhappy couple enters the Wife Carrying Contest, per the request of a young rookie psychologist, in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.

November 18, 2012
In the small harbor town of Boothbay, Maine, older married couple Phillip and Barbra who are both unhappy in their marriage, the young newlywed couple Doug and Sarah who just moved in next door, and longtime neighbor John that?s still hung up on his deceased wife, enter the Wife Carrying Contest after Sarah, a rookie psychologist, tells Barbra it will strengthen her marriage!

November 16, 2012
It?s 2087 and for the past fifteen years, the government has implanted everyone with chips that record the last ten minutes of memory. In murder cases, the chips are used by Recall Judge?s to find the killer and now, a rookie has his first case which may involve his boss, the Head Recall judge.

November 2, 2012

on Revision: An unhappy couple enters the Wife Carrying Contest, per the request of a young rookie psychologist, in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.

Thank you guys for all of your comments and everyone is exactly right. I changed it once more to add the comedy aspect and to show the antagonist of the story. With the new logline, I'm hoping it will explain…
on In the small harbor town of Boothbay, Maine, older married couple Phillip and Barbra who are both unhappy in their marriage, the young newlywed couple Doug and Sarah who just moved in next door, and longtime neighbor John that?s still hung up on his deceased wife, enter the Wife Carrying Contest after Sarah, a rookie psychologist, tells Barbra it will strengthen her marriage!

Everything you guys said is right. I'm going to shorten it up and what Richiev said is exactly what it is. Thank you guys once again.
on As the ghost of a young man lingers in his apartment, he gradually transforms into a vengeful, evil spirit as he gets more and more jealous of his roommates' lives and becomes convinced that they are starting to forget him

I think this is very interesting and will have a huge change from playful to scary.
on The President's Chopper crashes over enemy's territory, he must fight his way out or be killed.

Sounds bland, but with Harrison Ford or Liam Neeson, this could be great!
on There is a company that can reset your life. If you don't feel like you have succeed in life you can just reset your life.

This leaves a lot to the imagination, but leaves too much to the imagination! Who? What? When? Where?
on Tired of losing and hearing his organization bashed on sports talk radio, the owner of a pro hockey team hires the local station’s most vocal caller to run the team.

This sounds hilarious. I'm interested to know how he does. Most people are all talk. Sounds like a GOOD Adam Sandler film!
on A doctor is forced to relive his traumatic childhood in order to solve the mystery that may save his daughter's life.

This is interesting. You have my attention because I'm wondering exactly what will he go back to see that will help.
on When the woman he loves is murdered by a fundamentalist cult, an alchemist in 18th Century France, the charismatic Count St Germain, seeks his revenge and becomes an immortal assassin.

This sounds awesome!