will5577

Penpusher · 76 points

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A flawed, discarded Android rises from a salvage heap to battle a powerful Federation of Androids bent on the extermination of the human race.

March 8, 2017

on When a desperate father loses access to his only child, he attempts to take matters into his own hands, only to find himself taken hostage by his vindictive ex-wife.

"he attempts to take matters into his own hands" I feel this is too vague as well......what "MUST" he do? "taken hostage?" Again, what does this mean.....physical, mental...psychological?
on A pacified Viking warrior must pickup his sword and raise an army to rescue his son from an unlikely enemy hellbent on enslaving all of Scandinavia: unicorns.

I agree with Nir's comment.