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on Through proving himself innocent of his father's death, the monk Alyosha realizes his guilt as nurtured by Father Matthias, the renowned priest and Alyosha's dark mentor.

*debbiemoon*: Thank you for your detailed critique. I found it very helpful. As you can probably tell, this was my first logline/script. In a logline, isn't a little bit of ambiquity okay? In my script you never really do find…