victortiti89

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on A vampire hunter is frustrated when an isolated Mississippi town decides due process must be followed before she will be allowed to stake a dangerous vampire. – Blood and Justice

Very interesting story idea... Just make sure you follow what others have to say and it will make for an awesome story. The only thing I wouldn't personally like is to turn this into a kind of drama, but that's…
on While investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot to overthrow him.

Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn't ruthless, just " tough " would…
on When Air Force One and a large passenger plane’s engines fail, the hacker responsible informs one of the secret service agents that he has two hours before each plane crashes to either assassinate the President or let his wife and child die on the other plane.

The ideas contained within this logline are truly mindblowing! It appears very easy, as concept, when in fact, it is the exact opposite. It would make for a really fine, breath-taking action movie... Just be aware that an " Air…