Trevor

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• on When an ambitious archeologist finds an ancient crystal engraved with a hidden message, he funds a secret sea creature who unlocks the message so his brain remembers the secrets of the Atlantis civilisation in the crystal, allowing him to release the Talisman Knights; the so called purveyors of ancient antiques; to release their grip on him.

  "funds"? Did you mean to write "finds"? "his brain remembers": why include 'his brain'? There's just too much to taken in for me to care about any of this. What is going to be the dramatic/emotional engine? The duplication of…