Trenterprise

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The disfigured adopted son of a faith healer conspires to run away from home after he falls in love with glam rock and a beautiful yet rebellious crossdresser named Esmeralda in 1980s Nevada.

September 6, 2013
A young widow's son is kidnapped by a serial killer and will only be freed if she finishes his final murders and thus giving him an alibi.

August 23, 2013

on A rural Kansas family believes that love conquers all and good will always win out over evil until their daughter meets a young combat soldier with a bright future just as Iraq is breaking out.

The part that says "believes that love conquers all and good will always win out over evil" is a bit of a mouthful and not completely necessary. Try shortening it down to something like "A rural Kansas family who is…
on When a high-school kid gets invited to friend's party, he and his 2 friends must illegally buy alcohol to get laid and stand-up for each-other

Oh wait, my bad, this is meant to refer to an actual movie. (Whoops)
on A group of medal hungry Jamaicans and their coach after failing to qualify as sprinters, seek olympic redemption in the winter sport of bobsledding.

This sounds hilarious and unique enough to garnish attention. Well done.
on When a high-school kid gets invited to friend's party, he and his 2 friends must illegally buy alcohol to get laid and stand-up for each-other

This kind of premise has reached an overkill level. We get it: teens + alcohol + comedy + sex + bromance. It's been done to death. Bring something new to the formula.
on Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

This premise seems to be on a bit of the bland side and uses a bunch of cliches (e.g., young girl following in love with coworker, young girl spending too much of "daddy's money", spoiled-to-thankful reverse hero storyline). Also, the…