Torey Sinclair

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on A guilt ridden widower searches for his wife’s long estranged mother in order to tell her of her daughter’s death.

"searches". where does he search and why does he have to search? and why doesn't the mother in law not know of her daughter's death? these are just the questions i've come up with. good start though
on 5 friends find a radioactive rock, which grants them superpowers but now must protect the rock and the world from a war-mongering weapons manufacturer led by a vindictive executive without being arrested for counts of terrorism.

the others have all ready pointed out the logistical problems. I just wanna see that it seems like a lot is going on in this logline. You have they get superpowers, then they have to protect the rock, then they…
on A filthy rich ad man bets a corporate rival that he can live on the streets of N.Y. without the comforts of home or money for a month, which proves to be tougher than he thought.

basically what everyone else has said, what u got is a concept. an interesting concept. but my biggest problem is i dont get the genre of the film with this. This could describe a comedy, a dramatic piece, a crime…