Tim Lea

Hey patrochable - thx for the logline idea - it is summarised very well. The complication (to date) is the spiritual leader is offshore and in the script (to date) the protagonist has been deported from Indonesia for threatening to…

Interesting thoughts Chris, thx. As with earlier comments, the move is mainly thriller with revenge as a theme rather than its core theme. Its more about understanding and justice. in regards the antagonist they always say villains don't know they…

You're right saving people from further hardship does give more resonance to the issue of revenge. I guess my protagonist does want revenge at some level but what he needs is more an understanding, to bring someone to justice, but…

Thx again Nir - I had been struggling with the antagonist idea for a while and you've given me some very interesting and helpful views on it. Thx

I tend to agree with the other commentators - what is his over-riding reason (ie goal) in reforming the band and what are the barriers ? Is one of them now a druggie? Is one a transexual? or whatever the…

Thx or your feedback Nir - very much appreciate it. Fundamentally the story from a top-line perspective has the potential to be viewed as unPC. Rest assured I am only too mindful of walking a fine line between controversy and…