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A rebellious teenage girl and her brother discover a time-traveling chaise lounge in their Grandmother's attic- trapped in the past and facing King Tut's wrath, they find help from an unlikely source- their teenage Grandmother in 1956.
I have modified the last section to bring the irony full circle: "their rebellious teenage Grandmother in 1956."
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A teenager girl, forced on a family trip to visit her eccentric Grandmother, becomes an unwitting time traveler after discovering a magical chaise lounge in the attic- trapped in the past, she must seek help from an unlikely source- her 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956.
I'll add this, they aren't "stuck in 1956" but rather stuck traveling through time without being able to get "home." They move through time on a magical chaise lounge by reading history books... Ultimately, they choose, by accident it seems,…
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A teenager girl, forced on a family trip to visit her eccentric Grandmother, becomes an unwitting time traveler after discovering a magical chaise lounge in the attic- trapped in the past, she must seek help from an unlikely source- her 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956.
A revision...? Siblings become unwitting time travelers after discovering a magical chaise lounge in their eccentric Grandmother's attic- trapped in the past- they must seek help from an unlikely source- their 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956. Technically a brother and…
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With the unwanted help of a little girl in his building, a reclusive retired man with OCD tries to figure out which one of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment.
Cutting, try something along these lines... With unwanted help from a neighbor girl, a reclusive man with OCD struggles to discover which of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment. I got…
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On the verge of being alone for the rest of his life, a lazy man falls in love with a miniature woman who lives in the small model city that he finds in the spare bedroom of his new apartment, but when he can't figure out a way to shrink himself to her size he must push himself to his limits to find a way in, before he loses the girl of his dreams.
I agree about the start by Richiev: "" That just POPS. I had a lot written, but here's the key thoughts from me, try this: "A lonely man falls in love with a miniature woman he discovers living in a…
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With dreams of writing the next great American novel, a struggling author blackmails a middle-aged hitman for inspiration.
What I was looking for in this briefest of brief logline was a tweetable # of characters that would entice the recipient into wanting MORE! :-)
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With dreams of writing the next great American novel, a struggling author blackmails a middle-aged hitman for inspiration.
I guess I should have stipulated, this logline is meant to serve as a "twittersized" version: one that I can tweet out to an agent/manager/producer on a moment's notice!
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With dreams of writing the next great American novel, a struggling author blackmails a middle-aged hitman for inspiration.
Thank you, that is exactly what I am looking for!
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When Earth is threatened by a cosmic war, a young woman with newly-awakened powers becomes mankind's only defense.
I like it! My only concern is that "cosmic war" conflicts a bit with "only defense." Meaning, I see no "war" since we would be annihilated, which may be what is certain to happen, no? So, maybe When earth is…
