Themostepicguru
Penpusher · 65 points
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Describe your protagonist(s) and antagonist(s) with adjectives ex: enthusiastic scientist or daring scientist. Otherwise everything seems fine.
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I did a little bit of editing and dusting up here and there and it's a little more clearer now. It should be even more clearer with the feedback you guys gave. Thanks!