Terry Walsh

Recent reviews

• on After his aunt dies, a notoriously obnoxious lawyer will inherit 100 million dollars on the condition that he gets 5000 new friends on facebook within a week without using a computer. Or loose the money to a rival lawyer in charge of her estate.

  Technical details aside, I LOVE this concept. It's a little like BREWSTER'S MILLIONS but tuned to the tech side of present day. The story is about PEOPLE. What he needs is 10,000 PEOPLE (maybe more) to friend/follow him on Facebook…

• on Three rock music fans must overcome the isolation of personal soundscapes to find joy together.

  Thank you indeed for your thoughts. Around my house, with teenagers, the questions seems to be "Why should I uncover my ears, pause my music and have conversation with you??" It's like the motivation IS the milieu or vice versa.…

• on Three rock music fans must overcome the isolation of personal soundscapes to find joy together.

  I appreciate your question. This is actually a 10-15 minute play but I was asked for a logline. Here's a longer description: Two teenagers and a parent are isolated by their use of headphones, ear buds, and noise protection--i.e., personal…

• on A lowly intern will do anything to get a 'dream job' at the world's most famous media company, despite endless knock backs from the idiots who run the most hellish department: the kids television network.

  The phrase "...the idiots who run the most hellish department..." strikes a chord. It's reminiscent of "The idiots are running the asylum." Maybe that's good background music for this. Or, maybe not.

• on A group of friends on a camping trip have a chance encounter with an alien species and must keep them from finding out that the planet they intend to destroy is the one that they have accidentally crash landed on.

  The phrase "is the one that they" is wordy. Recast the last half, such as: ...must keep them learning that they crash landed on the very planet they set out to destroy.