spike2018

196 points

104 points to Logliner

6 loglines
7 reviews

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While the candle burns bright see and follow the illuminating light. Then the journey can truly begin.

March 3, 2018
After his famous brother is ritually murdered, a distraught writer, delves into a seedy underworld, hindered by suspects influential family, tries to snare the accused before he escapes to safe haven.

February 25, 2018
Devastated by the murder of his famous screenwriters murder, only brother seeks justice as police and FBI aren’t making enough progress, and pursues bipolar suspect, hindered at every turn by influential family.

February 23, 2018
Owner and his telepathically connected dog, impress every one they meet, and take the show on the road to financial independence.

February 19, 2018
Spike a shy, autistic football genius finds a teams playbook, easily memorizes it, then morphs into a gregarious man about town while helping the head coach win the big game

February 15, 2018
Logline: Spike an affable, autistic football genius helps a team win its first super Bowl. Concept: Spike and his older brother Bradley traverse through the city causing an uproar all while Spike is preparing the head coach to win the Super Bowl.

February 14, 2018

Recent reviews

on While the candle burns bright see and follow the illuminating light. Then the journey can truly begin.
on Owner and his telepathically connected dog, impress every one they meet, and take the show on the road to financial independence.

Owner and his telepathically connected dog,? covertly impress every one they meet, and take the show on the road ,truing to avoid the?troublemaker who knows the secret,.to financial independence
on Dear fellow writers, I wanted to share with you the good news about the release of my latest little project – a comedy web series titled God’s 17. You can check out our latest episode on our website: www.gods17.com

Great stuff! I'm humbled. Directing, writing, editing, camera..? do you act?? You're a busy guy and the cast was amazing too.? Love Satire? .?Will be checking out the other episodes soon.? As soon as I get some sleep. To bad…
on Dear fellow writers, I wanted to share with you the good news about the release of my latest little project – a comedy web series titled God’s 17. You can check out our latest episode on our website: www.gods17.com

Great stuff. Director, editor, camera do you act too?? The cast was really good too. Will be viewing? the other episodes soon. Love satire. To bad for God's 17 there are a multitude of natural disasters they haven't been blessed…
on THOUGHT: What I like about my brief time on this site so far…

I totally agree,? even with my limited knowledge,?that is apparent.? This is no doubt in my mind a great place to learn and hone some skills.?The more I read here the more I realize?how far ?out of?my?element I am.? For…
on Question for the admins… After a log has an initial thread, and later down the line additional changes are made, can you consider a way to post updates to the older thread while being able to bump it back to the top so that people will not miss things?

Some?excellent ideas. ?I had the same problem when I wrote a bad logline and wanted to update. Spent to much time trying to figure out how or if.? Even sent a note to support and got directed to somewhere that…
on A small town reporter tells a little white-lie to boost his ego and it snowballs out of controll. He must now make that lie a reality or be shamed out of town.

Agree with the other reviews. The first thing that caught my eye was little white lie.? If it were in quotation marks, it might give? it a larger significance, ?meaning it might actually be a larger lie and the?reader will…