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A talented and ambitious student decides to engage in a pro-democracy movement in her oppressive authoritarian state, all while she tries to get out of the country and into the foreign university to pursue her life’s dream.
When arrested during a democracy movement, a talented and ambitious student must face the choice of either running away to escape from prison and follow her studies, or stay home and face imprisonment. just a humble opinion.....
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A talented and ambitious student decides to engage in a pro-democracy movement in her oppressive authoritarian state, all while she tries to get out of the country and into the foreign university to pursue her life’s dream.
What is the main event? What's at stake? Still have to work your idea,
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KILLER BORN
When her best friend is murdered during an attack on the Nzou clan by a rival clan, a haughty adolescent must accept the role of the killer born to revenge and save her clan.
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SUDDEN AT RISK
Thanks for the guiding. I really appreciate it.
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When a devoted bodyguard inherits his dead employer’s debts, he must fight a crooked businessman who was both a good friend and partner to the deceased to save his life and that of the daughter of the death boss, with whom his affair are becoming ever more prevalent.
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Imprisoned cowboy elephant, Rabab (45), is presented with a 3-day do or die mission – capture a cowgirl vigilante, Sky (20), or his bomb collar will be detonated. But when Sky reveals that the Sheriff who imprisoned Rabab was involved in the genocide of Rabab’s race, Rabab must team up with Sky, take down the Sheriff and his deputies, and remove the bomb collar before his trunk blows off.
it sounds interesting but the logline needs to be reworked. it has the main elements of a good one since we have a little idea of who is the character, who is the force against him and what are the…
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After the death of his employer, a devoted bodyguard is far from knowing he has inherited all plus the old demons of his employer of which he has to fight to save his life and that of the daughter of the deceased with whom he has a secret affair
Physical. Nothing supernatural. Just to represent the forces against him.
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A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
I go for this... Amazing...
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An ex-soldier working for a Security company as a security guard gets stuck in a drug set-up targeting his employer. Chased by the police, he has to fight a controvert ex-Marshal of the Army while escaping the cops to prove his innocence, save his life and that of his love ones.
Great one there... It's just perfect. Thanks....
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When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.
What's the protagonist struggle? And what's at stake? Making the Idea mor shorter will be better. But overall I am already impatient to read your development. Contact me mutual help.
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A middle aged outcast becomes determined to seek revenge against his abusive wife as a masked vigilante armed with a robotic pistol.
Who is the protagonist? Him or his wife? What's at stake?
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A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
Great idea but I think you need to simplify your logline so that it can easily be understood by the public. It's a little bit complex and hard to buy in from the first look.
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An ex-soldier far from home gets stuck up in a huge set up targeting his employer. proving his innocence by fighting a general of the army and a controverse businessman behind all of this, is all he can do to save his live.
Sabotage aimed at discrediting his employer.
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An ordinary teacher faces war with alien warriors who wish to invade earth
it is interesting because it raises the question of how will an ordinary teacher face the aliens? if your character is worked properly i thing we will have a great story.
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An argument between two friends brings about the end of their relationship.
who is your protagonist and who is the antagonist? the end of the relationship may be at stake but it's not strong enough to grasp the reader's attention.
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An ex-soldier far from home gets stuck up in a huge set up targeting his employer. proving his innocence by fighting a general of the army and a controverse businessman behind all of this, is all he can do to save his live.
what do you think of this one? Raymond ex-soldier discovers a huge conspiracy targeting the world's biggest technological exposition while trying to prove his innocence in a set-up targeting his employer. He has to fight against a big multinational topped…
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An ex-soldier far from home gets stuck up in a huge set up targeting his employer. proving his innocence by fighting a general of the army and a controverse businessman behind all of this, is all he can do to save his live.
Raymond ex-soldier discovers a huge conspiracy targeting the world's biggest technological exposition while trying to prove his innocence in a set-up targeting his employer. He has to fight against a big multinational topped by a general of the army to…
