SG2210

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10 loglines
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A crisis manager gets recruited by the vigilante crew he idolizes to expose how the family business he is paid to protect sells memories.

December 31, 2019
A crisis manager gets recruited by the vigilante crew he idolizes to investigate if the family business he is paid to protect sells memories.

December 30, 2019
A crisis manager by day and citizen journalist by night is recruited by a vigilante mob to expose the corporation he is paid to protect.

December 28, 2019
(3rd revision, 35 words) In order to name a rebellious son as heir to a dynasty that sells raided memories, a patriarch must fabricate a succession rite inside his mind, before he releases an expos? of his shady dealings.

December 25, 2019
(2nd revision) In order to name his rebellious son as heir to a dynasty that sells raided memories, an aging patriarch must fake a memory of succession inside him, before he fulfills a vow to expose his business.

December 25, 2019
When the megalomaniac magnate of a memory-erasing mafia refuses to name any of his bellicose triplets as successor, they race against each other to expose the memories he erased before the mafia erases theirs.

December 24, 2019
When an overdosed addict falls into a coma, he must stop his past selves from using heroin to wake up before he dies.

December 8, 2019
Crashed on a faraway planet with retrograde amnesia, a young, ingenious but highly schizophrenic astronaut strives to rebuild her spacecraft while endeavoring to outwit a manipulative, shape-shifting alien whose sole impetus is to repopulate by abusing her as a host.

December 7, 2019
A disgraced winemaker sets out to exact revenge on the farmer he thinks sold him poisoned grapes.

October 9, 2019
Two NYT investigators must pursue three decades of sexually harassed women to incriminate a powerful film producer.

October 6, 2019

Recent reviews

on A crisis manager by day and citizen journalist by night is recruited by a vigilante mob to expose the corporation he is paid to protect.

Considering all of your super-detailed and incredibly welcome feedback, I've decided to give this concept one final push, after revising for a considerable period of time these past days. Special huge thank you to Mr. Danzig for his continued detailed…
on When the megalomaniac magnate of a memory-erasing mafia refuses to name any of his bellicose triplets as successor, they race against each other to expose the memories he erased before the mafia erases theirs.

Thank you all for your super-helpful feedback! I've posted a second logline as a revision of the first, titled (2nd revision), which I hope meets all of your suggestions and feedback - or at least improves upon this one here.…
on Crashed on a faraway planet with retrograde amnesia, a young, ingenious but highly schizophrenic astronaut strives to rebuild her spacecraft while endeavoring to outwit a manipulative, shape-shifting alien whose sole impetus is to repopulate by abusing her as a host.

Thank you all for the feedback! I understand how it's challenging to suspend disbelief on the schizophrenia aspect. It doesn't make sense. My apologies for that -- I am removing that detail, as it wasn't as relevant to the story…
on Two NYT investigators must pursue three decades of sexually harassed women to incriminate a powerful film producer.

Thank you all for your feedback! I will try my best to improve this logline as best as I can - I am grateful for your help.