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Tony/dpg -a valid point that I'll try to explain: The couple is trying to isolate themselves from their past notoriety...so although they are currently trying to lead a private life they weren't doing so previously. This allows them to have…

Dpg--thanks for the feedback but I'm not sure exactly what you're getting at here...You think the logline should more pointedly address that it is their own fault this heap of chaos falls down upon them? (Is that due to my…

Best I have for tonight: A happy couple's wedding is suddenly in jeopardy when they accidentally send an invitation to thousands of their Facebook "friends" who show up during the festivities and force the couple to reassess their commitment.

This is what I have so far: A couple is forced to deal with a lifetime of baggage over a single weekend when their wedding invite is accidentally sent to thousands of Facebook "friends" who show up and jeopardize the…

Thanks guys! Yes, I think I've been using this as an "elevator pitch" (to steal a phrase) and the response has been immediate understanding that as a wedding story there are lots of things that can go wrong and folks…

Excellent discussion if the STAKES, thanks!

Although I agree with you that I am indeed missing the arc (how did that happen?) but the mistake I allude to is just the Catalyst and of minor importance because the the two Debate whether to rescind the invite…

Thanks for the nice response--I've been beating my head over this sentence for quite some time now and have my beats worked out. I'm really hoping to start working on my scenes now!