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A sleek female sports agent struggles to get her papers from the evils of this world and beyond.

October 2, 2013

on When a Classic Rock radio station sets up in a Texas Bible Belt army town as VetNam protests escalate, a bumbling, nerdy teen is given a life-changing opportunity to become a radio host, not knowing the Manson Family has targeted the station for violence

The logline for 93.7 seems long. What is the life changing event? The life changing event is not about him being the radio host but how it changes him in his life.
on When a father and son novice racing team decides to enter the Baja 500 they face challenges to survive not only the race but drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military.

The logline for BAJA has the objective and subjective storyline. With all the parts of a screenplay in place it could be economical.