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on A homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence after he?s framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence.

Hi Leebo, The thing with your revision is that it brings up more questions than you can answer and I think you would be better trying to re-work it so they don't come up. To that extent, I think the…
on After killing his boss a concaine enraged drug dealer goes on a sleep deprived 48 hour murderous rampage attempting take control of the drug network.

I agree with dpg - why should we the viewer side with the MC? Why did he kill his boss beyond being drug-crazed? I'm not sure about the genre either - is it an action-packed thriller, or a horror movie?…