RRehavi
Penpusher · 61 points
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- 2 reviews
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This is sort of everywhere at all at once, consider streamlining the story?
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The idea of a manipulative, evil psychologist is an interesting one, but be careful when writing the protagonist, too pathetic and we may learn to hate him, not pathetic enough and he's bland. I like it, The log-line is a…