RoseVilaflor

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on In her online search for ?Mr. Right,? a timid computer programmer builds an algorithm that evolves into a rogue Artificial Intelligence?which the government wants to terminate.

Hi byron79, I like this logline. It's intriguing, it gives an idea where the audience is going and even gives a clear picture of who is the protagonist. What I'm missing is more clarity on who is the antagonist. Government,…
on When a family-less teenage Jewish boy encounters a girl depicted as Jewish and promises to be together before he is sent to a Nazi camp, he gets help from a Commandant to be acknowledged she is Hitler?s daughter, but he decides to keep the promise and find her out.

Hi Andre, Reading your logine is confusing. It's more of a beginning of a story and not a logline. As much as I understand it, a logline should be concise and should reflect the full range of what the movie…