Rodallex

Penpusher · 24 points

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on When a willful engineer gets into an accident on her first space mission, she has to learn to let go of both her past and her fears so that she can make it back to earth alive.

Gravity. Good work. I think being more specific might help? What do you think? When an engineer who has lost her daughter experiences a catastrophic accident on her first space mission, she has to regain the will to live in…
on When Ford wants to compete at the twenty-four-hour long race at Le Mans, a car designer must team up with a maverick race car driver in order to build a revolutionary car that can challenge and even beat Ferrari at the prestigious race.

Good, but can maybe be tightened up. Maybe: When Ford decides to win the prestigious 24 hour race at Le Mans, a car designer must team up with a maverick race car driver to try to beat the legendary Ferrari…