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How about A desperate griffin and his team of monsters must fight through a horde of zombies to capture the only thing that will return his family?s honor, an immune human.? From what you said above, it seems like loyalty…
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This was really a tough one. I feel like there's a piece missing. I agree with nicholasandrewhalls and would dump the "in a world" part but I'd also dump the "superiors" both of these will come out in the sp,…
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"A young boy recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora's Box from Lucifer and return him to his true form, the Angel of Darkness." The waking up human part I'd leave out. I don't know how old your…
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on Creative youth in search of the spark that will change their lives
Is it A creative youth or creative youths? The reason is because of the word their. "A creative youth goes in search of the spark that will define his/her life." That's the best I can do with what you've given… -
Richiev said exactly what I thought, shorten it. When a CEO loses his legs, he must reinvent(is more proactive than re-evaluate)his identity (or else, before, some sort of consequence).