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on A woman with a troubled past is contacted repeatedly by a serial killer who seems to know her deepest secrets.

Hi Kevin, looks like your script is headed in a great direction! - Great notes & feedback - For your logline however, I might suggest clarifying a bit - Help us understand their connection - Is she totally in the…
on When a woman has to leave her abusive husband, she moves to a remote community and must unite them with a school singing competition.

Good premise, I would just like to understand the school & singing connection a bit more? - Does she have a daughter or kids she takes with her? Also- Why is the community divided, and singing the key to uniting…
on Having lost everything to the I.R.S., a wealthy and materialistic New York executive couple is forced to start all over again with nothing? in the heart of the Bermuda Triangle!

I like the premise a lot. Lot's of potential. However, just a thought -- The Bermuda Triangle almost seemed liked an after thought to me -- Why of all places after losing their money choose there & not say... Vegas?…