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4 loglines
2 reviews

Loglines

When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the dark secrets of their small town and a possible serial killer among the town?s elite.

February 15, 2018
When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the sinister secrets of their town and the work of a serial killer.

December 21, 2017
When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the dark and sinister secrets of their town.

December 12, 2017
When an black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four friends and their dog set out to find him, discovering that things are much more sinister than they seem.

December 7, 2017

Recent reviews

on Spike a shy, autistic football genius finds a teams playbook, easily memorizes it, then morphs into a gregarious man about town while helping the head coach win the big game

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I think you need to provide some context to grab the readers attention. What is the story?? Hope this helps a bit. Cheers.