Ray Star/ing

Penpusher · 166 points

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6 loglines
4 reviews

A young couple doesn’t attach much importance to their failing relationship until a gang commits a violent takeover of America and it parts them completely!

December 19, 2018
A teen mom is almost old enough to leave home, but her gypsy family criminal ways will make her the victim instead.

November 18, 2018
A hostile takeover of America causes a couple to stop bickering and start working together.

November 18, 2018
A dead husband waits to be reunited with his wife, but he isn’t the only one waiting.

November 18, 2018
Strange people in a foreign land with no constitutional rights, these Irish gypsies learn the hard way that the criminal can become the crime victim!

October 28, 2018
Stand-alone episodes with a revolving cast determined to enter the psyche of viewers and leave behind irrational, unrealistic, or environmentally triggered fears and an ending that will be anything but happy!

October 27, 2018

on A young couple doesn’t attach much importance to their failing relationship until a gang commits a violent takeover of America and it parts them completely!

Thank you all, am going to try to switch it around, again. Is the previous version the one I should fix and dump this new one? "A young couple thinks that bickering is what threatens their marriage, until an international…
on After an 18 year old teenager who was born and raised on a safe space colony on Mars visits the post-apocalyptic Earth for the first time, he needs to find out,where he really belongs ? with his family up on the Mars, or down here on the Earth.

I suck at loglines, but I can shorten sentences, etc.? I would shorten to: An 18 year old (or just "teenager") who was born and raised on a safe space colony on Mars visits post-apocalyptic Earth for the first time,…
on A teen mom is almost old enough to leave home, but her gypsy family criminal ways will make her the victim instead.

For this story, "Luck of the Irish," she worked as a nurse's aid for dying woman and once patient died there was a short amount of time to sell the woman's car before family came looking for it. Listed it…
on A group of sister have a lengthy conversation trying to fill in the social, cultural and physiological blanks about a long extinct species: Humans.

A group of sisters have a lengthy conversations as they attempt to learn the social, cultural and physiological processes of a mostly unknown and extinct species: Human.Here's my take, but I'm a newbie...