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on After he kills his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, a teenager and his best friend turn their picture-perfect road trip into a fool-proof plan to dispose of the body, as they narrowly elude several close encounters with the police.

I think it gets a little too wordy. If I read that in the TV guide I'd pass because it's a lot to digest. I also wouldn't watch this based on the protagonist being a criminal of the worst sort.…
on "Enemy at the Gates" meets spaghetti western.

Interesting, but I don't think Enemy at the Gates was popular enough to make most people connect what you are trying to say. Also the logline doesn't imply the conflict concretely for me, there are dozens of directions you could…