Pstone

Penpusher · 106 points

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4 loglines
2 reviews

After a celebrity impersonator learns that both his wife and mistress are pregnant, he struggles with keeping the pregnancies secret. But after admitting to living an adulterous lifestyle, he winds up as a vagrant without hope of ever rebuilding his life.

April 9, 2018
A professional doppelganger of a famous actor, impregnates both his wife and his lover. Using his fame as his currency, he pays a hefty price for adultery.

March 20, 2018
After a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.

March 14, 2018
When a single lovesick flight attendant is introduced to a married doppelganger of a famous actor, they struggle with infidelity as he dodges divorce.

March 13, 2018

on A married woman, riddled with guilt, starts over in a tiny village, but making it her home gets even tougher when she discovers she’s falling for the vicar.

Saturday March 24-2018 Apart from being as economical as possible with the use of words, I like looking for three things in a logline as follows: 1 - The protagonist - In your case that would be, "A married woman".…
on A smooth talking, but psychologically damaged, criminal with face-blindness rips off a dangerous drug-lord with help from his tough-guy brother. When they are betrayed by their psychopathic accomplice, he must overcome his psychological challenges and track the psychopath through the underground world of experimental hallucinogenic psycho-therapy in order to retrieve the drugs and prevent his brother being murdered.

I would try to shorten this logline. I'll give it a shot. See what you feel! "A smooth talking psychologically damaged criminal, with face-blindness and his brother rips off a drug-lord. They are betrayed by their psychopathic accomplice who must…