Pranavkoli

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on Teen brothers ALEX and STEVE enter the astonishing door of AZELDOOM, lead a mega war of three supernatural powers for entitled Castle, but finally get defeated by the Dragon Lord ZARDTH.

Synopsis: A Time Traveler teleports teen siblings ALEX and STEVE to the land of ARTHIMIS without their parents concerned. They disclose the secret of their parents and themselves, as Alex is the Savior and entitled to the throne of Arthimis…
on After Alexander The Great’s death, one of his generals seizes Egypt, fights to restore it into a mighty empire, and eventually becomes Pharoah, founding a dynasty of kings, queens, and gods.

Replace founding with reveling or establishing in your logline as its emphasis on the characters bond. Your logline should look like: Despite death of Alexander the great, one of his retainer seize to restore Egyptian empire, reveling the dynasty of…