Philster

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After building a machine that can see the future, a young inventor and his friend use it to get rich, only to run afoul of gangsters.

June 10, 2018

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on When a bookshop goes bankrupt, life is thrown into uncertainty for those who call it home. ‘D’ is eager to win a chance to launch her music career and finally escape her crippling double life. ‘B’ has a fatal secret she keeps from her surrogate children and sets out on a personal quest. While ‘W’ just lets life pass him by as he’s forced to come to grips with his sexuality and the prospect of his father never coming back for him.

I'd say it's interesting, but it could be shorter, something along the lines of "The bookstore employee's are forced to confront the future and the past."
on When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, the high school film club, stranded in the wilderness, must use all their skills and movie knowledge to stay alive until help arrives.

Beyond the need for a clear protagonist, this sounds interesting,