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A gay boy and girl, bullied in their youth form a deep friendship and as they turn into young adults they hear of a boy who was bullied to death, so they enroll in the high school that the boy attended, and use their amazing computer skills to get revenge on the bully by infiltrating her inner circle and using social media to turn the tables.
Thank you so so much this is amazing and valuable feedback!!!!
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A gay boy and girl, bullied in their youth form a deep friendship and as they turn into young adults they hear of a boy who was bullied to death, so they enroll in the high school that the boy attended, and use their amazing computer skills to get revenge on the bully by infiltrating her inner circle and using social media to turn the tables.
This is my first attempt at a log line and I am 99.9% sure it. Is way too long. Humbly looking to learn.
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When a sentient video game character falls in love with the real-life player, she must get rid of the other characters to gain the player’s affections, even if that means rewriting the game script.
Nicely done. This has perked my interest. Learning myself. But it seems concise and creates a desire for me to see the story
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In the depths of the depression, a small time con artist teams up with a seasoned pro to con $500,000 from a ruthless mobster to avenge the mobster’s murder of his mentor.
I wasn’t sure who the mentor had the relationship with but it seems to have been clarified. It looks like something I’d enjoy seeing
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After awakening from a ten-year coma, a wise-cracking gay wheelchair-bound French assassin discovers his arch-nemesis, the psychotic Jameson Juicer, murdered his family, to seek revenge he must sneak into the 13 story-Juicer-compound filled with hundreds of cut-throats, and absolutely no handicap accessibility.
Not sure if serious or not. Might be an interesting comedy but needs work. Sometimes absurdity can be great and if that’s what you’re going for you may be on the right track. A bit too wordy still
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After a long career, a retired sheriff in the old west is forced to defend himself against war crime allegations from the civil war. Dividing the town and discrediting his legacy.
Really like this log line. It’s concise and it’s a movie I’d like to see! Truly. Not enough quality westerns. Great job!
