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on After failing his final mission to receive his wings and graduate to guardianship, an angel must work with his client – a depressed mime ? to help him discover reasons to continue living and to fulfill his own quest of becoming a guardian angel.

I like the beginning of the logline that tells us what has happened, he has failed his final mission to receive wings and graduate to guardainship, but I agree with the other comments that it is a bit confusing who…
on When a submissive guy, working for the mafia, is caught by the police he must help them to put the mafia behind bars to get the girl he really wants.

Hi, good logline, I only have one question about it. Is his goal to get "the girl he really wants" or is his goal to not be a submissive guy any more? Maybe to not work for the mafia anymore/to…