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After Losing a leg in a tragic accident, A star hockey player pursues a return to his former team

August 15, 2013
Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

August 15, 2013
Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

August 15, 2013

on Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

I didn't think of that but will run with both of them and see where it takes me.
on Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

i was doing some thinking and i going to rewrite the logline as i am thinking of going into a different direction with this. I am thinking that instead of getting a job to back back a debt she she…
on When Tobi continues to act out, his guardians have no choice but to send him to seek help. The result is anything but textbook.

sounds good. As other has said i would reconsider using names in the logline. But this one has potential
on When a high-school kid gets invited to friend's party, he and his 2 friends must illegally buy alcohol to get laid and stand-up for each-other

I like this logline