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• on After the arrest of a missionary who lives with him, an ostracized amateur-Christian seeks justice in a fetish cultural island where there is no rule of law.

  Arrest does not mean legal detention, also mean ?hold back as of an enemy?. The rule of law mean a state of order in which event is conformed to law, but in this community, there was nothing of such kind.…

• on After the arrest of a missionary who lives with him, an ostracized amateur-Christian seeks justice in a fetish cultural island where there is no rule of law.

  Arrest does not mean legal detention, also mean 'hold back as of an enemy'. The rule of law mean a state of order in which event is conformed to law, but in this community, there was nothing of such kind.…

• on After the arrest of a missionary who lives with him, an ostracized amateur-Christian seeks justice in a fetish cultural island where there is no rule of law.

  Amateur-Christian is a kind of Christian who has no strong skill, rather whose faith is not as strong as to know much about the rites and ritual according to Christian faith. Fetish culture Island describes that the Island practices fetishism,…

• on Left alone with her psychotic grandmother, a young girl steps into a nightmarish world of fear, loneliness and hunger. She is faced with a choice- stay safe or find food.

  Is the first phrase of the first sentence good enough for the second and third phrase as to engage the second sentence? I feel the logline has to put clear the environment or the background of the girl's situation. The…

• on Thwarted at every attempt to win over the girl of his dreams, an awkward boy (8) has to overcome his deepest fear to draw her into a magical world.

  The logline is ok, but I discovered that writing kids are not as easy as most of our writer colleagues think. This will make a great movie if properly structured and written. Good luck.

• on ?Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ?Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years.?

  The word 'despite', should that be 'disguise' or just what it is? if it is despite, the logline needs to be revisited. It is a good logline to make a good compelling story.