outinthebeach

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on When a narcissistic property developer is convicted for murdering a government official, he must untangle the web of deceit, to prove his innocence

Thanks Sumi
on When a narcissistic property developer is convicted for murdering a government official, he must untangle the web of deceit, to prove his innocence

Thank you FWIW and FFF for your feedback. ?Much appreciated.I was trying to follow the rule book in trying to keep it 25 words or below. Trying to cram in the possible answers for the Q's raised, does increase the…
on When a magic trick turns fatal on one of their wives, two magician friends turn rivals to create the ultimate stage illusion with dangerous consequences. The Prestige

Hi EmmaMck,Thank you for your review and comments. ?I looked at it from the point of view of both the protagonists. In this story, it really depends on the perception ?of who you want to regard as the protagonist because…