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This is definitely a great concept, but what would happen after his youth is restored? Would he become a fugitive again? It feels like getting his youth back wouldn't be the end of the story, but a secondary goal for…
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I will develop it and see where it takes me. I guess the guilt theme doesn't work so well in this story. Thank you very much for your time FFF, really appreciated!
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You just mentioned the exact element that I want to develop in the script: guilt. The protagonist would feel guilty for not doing something about the killing. On the other hand, he would try to keep his affaire a secret,…
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Good point FFF. It actually feels like the film could end right there.How about this?: When an unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis witnesses the assassination of his lover, he becomes obsessed with uncovering the killer to make justice.The key…