OrdinaryDreams

Penpusher · 116 points

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on Version 3: When a tutor?s student unexpectedly follows her through a magical doorway then disappears, she struggles to locate him and find the way home despite losing her magic.

Edited to show Version 2. Still needs work, but maybe I'm going in the right direction now at least?
on After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family. ★ Accepted

Interesting idea Lorato, and nice suggested rework Dkpough1. More words could be cut too, I think. ?born? could be removed as birth or being born is implied in the word stillborn. ?generational? could go too, as that?s implied in something…
on When a Psychic Private Investigator becomes infected with the consciousness of his latest target, he must team up with his inner demons to rid his mind of his unwanted guest.

When a Psychic Private Investigator becomes infected with the consciousness of his latest target, he must team up with his inner demons to rid his mind of his unwanted guest." A lot of "he" and "his" for a one-liner. Is…